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Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Solitary Breathing

we fight our battles
we win our wars.
breathing together through the fire
and scars.
you tried to save me
but i killed you instead.
"died too young"
is all no one said.
they don't see
the inside
'cause they only look
with their eyes.

i can't control the black hole i've created
and i'm sorry i sucked you in.
but promise me, my defiant love
you'll carry on, you'll carry on.

so in your absence
i fight ever harder than i have before.
but tonight i breathe alone
i breathe alone


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9 comments:

Anonymous said...

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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A PICTURE!

Jenna said...

Wow, that's so pretty <33 You always write gorgeous poetry.
And I love the roses, in this post and in your blog title/description box.
I'm so into roses lol ^.^

Savy said...

surprised... remind me again why you're not using your blogger ID? And, yes, a picture Mr.king-of-pictures-videos-and-anything-else-people-look-at

cowgirl4christ... thank you!

i know, I love roses too. I was going to put one of a rose and bible but it wouldn't fit right... I'll just post it on The Coming Of Genuis!

Anonymous said...

This is the coolest blog!!!! Can I link you?


This is a beautiful poem btw, it's really really good, you have talent!

Krosemarie

meh said...

i love this....so much...you don't know.. you're amazing, savy!

Anonymous said...

wow thi post was entertaining!

Savy said...

Krosemarie... sure you can link me! I'm glad you take interest in my blog!

Anonymous said...

Thanks so much for your comment on my blog!!!!

Savy said...

anytime